| Two poems of mine | |
|
+6Sage♥ HannahGemFriend30 AnnaBee priscillaballerina31 Lillybearathlete1 GoalieBear 10 posters |
Author | Message |
---|
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Two poems of mine Sat May 15, 2010 6:12 pm | |
| is there where i can post poems? well anyway here are some of my poems that i created myself My grandma was so weak, She couldn't even speak.
She's laying in bed, With an aching head.
We're about to cry, As i'm saying good-bye.
The next day, To the hospital,on our way.
We got there that day, They told us she passed way.
A tear down my face, they see, My grandma has now left me.- Spoiler:
True story about my grandma Sadness is... A dark path you searched and can't find your way out. A rainy cloud upon you and dosen't go away. A passion for someone who doesn't love you back. An animal in need of an owner to love.My kitten jumps and plays, she's non-stop. She's pretty and purrfect for people like me. I just wish sometimes she would calm down. The day i found her in the street, was the best day for her and me. until the day, when she couldn't stay. but, then she came back. i will NEVER regret that day. she is a chubby pig that eats like one. she eats as if it was the last food on earth "Meow" she goes, more food for her she sleeps all day, energetic at night she drives me bananas her eyes are as green as grass she's a soft mitten, i love my babv kitten
Last edited by Sage on Sat May 15, 2010 7:17 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| |
Lillybearathlete1 rockin' officer
Posts : 2308 Join date : 2010-03-24 Location : USA! :D
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sat May 15, 2010 6:21 pm | |
| Wow. Those are so poignant. (vocabulary i learned in English ) Very sad but beautiful | |
|
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sat May 15, 2010 6:26 pm | |
| thank you lilly what does poignant mean? | |
|
| |
Lillybearathlete1 rockin' officer
Posts : 2308 Join date : 2010-03-24 Location : USA! :D
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sat May 15, 2010 6:27 pm | |
| Poignant means like emotional and deep. It is a compliment | |
|
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sat May 15, 2010 6:36 pm | |
| oh ok thanks .. i worked hard on them .. i'm glad you liked them | |
|
| |
priscillaballerina31 overstuffed bear
Posts : 3453 Join date : 2010-03-11 Location : somewhere over the rainbow
| |
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sat May 15, 2010 8:22 pm | |
| thanks lilly.. i'm glad you like them | |
|
| |
AnnaBee building bunny
Posts : 92 Join date : 2010-05-15
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sun May 16, 2010 3:11 am | |
| sad about the grandma one | |
|
| |
HannahGemFriend30 Administrator
Posts : 2080 Join date : 2009-06-06 Location : Wonderland
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sun May 16, 2010 9:15 am | |
| Wow Sage! Good Work! Very Nice! I Love your poems! and I'm sorry about your grandma! But pawsome work! Great Job BFF!! | |
|
| |
Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sun May 16, 2010 10:29 am | |
| They are so beautiful, You have a talent |
|
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sun May 16, 2010 11:02 am | |
| Thank you Priscilla it also touched my teachers heart I know annabee and it really happend thank you Hannah.... It's ok Hannah it was bound to happen sometime Thanks Camilla .... You really think so? Thanks | |
|
| |
Sage♥ Owner
Posts : 768 Join date : 2009-04-19 Location : In a dreamland
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Tue May 18, 2010 1:03 pm | |
| It seems, that it must have been awful for you, I know how it feels as I recently lost a grandfather. Great poems. | |
|
| |
AJCool building bunny
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-05-18
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Tue May 18, 2010 1:05 pm | |
| Lovely poems im sorry to hear about your Grandma you must be really sad. | |
|
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Tue May 18, 2010 6:08 pm | |
| i know admin and thank you for understanding .. i'm sorry to hear that about you granfather thank you ajcool... yeah i was the minute i knew about her death but know soince it was a while ago i just always tell myself that she's not suffering no more.. she's in a better place and will always be with me in my heart .. | |
|
| |
Rae junior helper
Posts : 558 Join date : 2009-04-19
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Fri May 21, 2010 12:11 pm | |
| your great at writing poems the grandma one was very sad it must have been hard for you | |
|
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Fri May 21, 2010 12:41 pm | |
| thank you alice ... yes it was | |
|
| |
katiebee pawsome poster
Posts : 738 Join date : 2009-07-01 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Fri May 21, 2010 12:59 pm | |
| Those are wonderful please do right more i am so sorry about your grandma | |
|
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Fri May 21, 2010 1:06 pm | |
| thank you.. really? you want me to write more? ...... it's ok, she's always with me ( in my heart ) | |
|
| |
Rae junior helper
Posts : 558 Join date : 2009-04-19
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Fri May 21, 2010 1:31 pm | |
| Please can you write more your so good at it | |
|
| |
GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Fri May 21, 2010 2:56 pm | |
| thank you alice i'll work on some | |
|
| |
AbbyArtsy78 junior helper
Posts : 364 Join date : 2010-03-26
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine Sat May 22, 2010 9:40 am | |
| Sorry for your loss, Beatiful poem's though | |
|
| |
Sponsored content
| Subject: Re: Two poems of mine | |
| |
|
| |
| Two poems of mine | |
|