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    GoalieBear
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    PostSubject: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:12 pm

    is there where i can post poems?

    well anyway here are some of my poems that i created myself Very Happy


    My grandma was so weak,
    She couldn't even speak.

    She's laying in bed,
    With an aching head.

    We're about to cry,
    As i'm saying good-bye.

    The next day,
    To the hospital,on our way.

    We got there that day,
    They told us she passed way.

    A tear down my face, they see,
    My grandma has now left me.


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    Sadness is...
    A dark path you searched and can't find your way out.
    A rainy cloud upon you and dosen't go away.
    A passion for someone who doesn't love you back.
    An animal in need of an owner to love.


    My kitten jumps and plays,
    she's non-stop.
    She's pretty and purrfect for people like me.
    I just wish sometimes she would calm down.
    The day i found her in the street,
    was the best day for her and me.
    until the day, when she couldn't stay.
    but, then she came back.
    i will NEVER regret that day.
    she is a chubby pig that eats like one.
    she eats as if it was the last food on earth
    "Meow" she goes, more food for her 👅
    she sleeps all day, energetic at night
    she drives me bananas
    her eyes are as green as grass
    she's a soft mitten, i love my babv kitten Very Happy


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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:21 pm

    Wow. Those are so poignant. (vocabulary i learned in English Smile) Very sad but beautiful
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:26 pm

    thank you lilly Smile

    what does poignant mean?
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:27 pm

    Poignant means like emotional and deep. It is a compliment Smile
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:36 pm

    oh ok thanks Smile .. i worked hard on them Very Happy .. i'm glad you liked them Smile
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 8:04 pm

    Very wonderful and heartfelt poems! They really touched my heart!♥️♥️
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 8:22 pm

    thanks lilly.. i'm glad you like them Very Happy
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 3:11 am

    Sad sad about the grandma one
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 9:15 am

    Wow Sage! Good Work! Very Nice! I Love your poems!
    and I'm sorry about your grandma!

    But pawsome work! Great Job BFF!! Very Happy

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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 10:29 am

    They are so beautiful, You have a talent Smile
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 11:02 am

    Thank you Priscilla it also touched my teachers heart

    I know annabee and it really happend Sad

    thank you Hannah.... It's ok Hannah it was bound to happen sometime

    Thanks Camilla Very Happy .... You really think so? Thanks Smile
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Tue May 18, 2010 1:03 pm

    It seems, that it must have been awful for you, I know how it feels as I recently lost a grandfather. Great poems.

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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Tue May 18, 2010 1:05 pm

    Lovely poems im sorry to hear about your Grandma you must be really sad.
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Tue May 18, 2010 6:08 pm

    i know admin and thank you for understanding .. i'm sorry to hear that about you granfather Sad


    thank you ajcool... yeah i was the minute i knew about her death but know soince it was a while ago i just always tell myself that she's not suffering no more.. she's in a better place and will always be with me in my heart .. Smile
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 12:11 pm

    your great at writing poems the grandma one was very sad it must have been hard for you
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 12:41 pm

    thank you alice Smile ... yes it was Sad
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 12:59 pm

    Those are wonderful please do right more Smile i am so sorry about your grandma
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 1:06 pm

    thank you.. really? you want me to write more? Smile ...... it's ok, she's always with me Very Happy ( in my heart Smile )
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 1:31 pm

    Please can you write more your so good at it Very Happy
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 2:56 pm

    thank you alice Smile i'll work on some Very Happy
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    PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 22, 2010 9:40 am

    Sorry for your loss, Beatiful poem's though
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