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PostSubject: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:12 pm

is there where i can post poems?

well anyway here are some of my poems that i created myself Very Happy


My grandma was so weak,
She couldn't even speak.

She's laying in bed,
With an aching head.

We're about to cry,
As i'm saying good-bye.

The next day,
To the hospital,on our way.

We got there that day,
They told us she passed way.

A tear down my face, they see,
My grandma has now left me.


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Sadness is...
A dark path you searched and can't find your way out.
A rainy cloud upon you and dosen't go away.
A passion for someone who doesn't love you back.
An animal in need of an owner to love.


My kitten jumps and plays,
she's non-stop.
She's pretty and purrfect for people like me.
I just wish sometimes she would calm down.
The day i found her in the street,
was the best day for her and me.
until the day, when she couldn't stay.
but, then she came back.
i will NEVER regret that day.
she is a chubby pig that eats like one.
she eats as if it was the last food on earth
"Meow" she goes, more food for her 👅
she sleeps all day, energetic at night
she drives me bananas
her eyes are as green as grass
she's a soft mitten, i love my babv kitten Very Happy


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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:21 pm

Wow. Those are so poignant. (vocabulary i learned in English Smile) Very sad but beautiful
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:26 pm

thank you lilly Smile

what does poignant mean?
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:27 pm

Poignant means like emotional and deep. It is a compliment Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 6:36 pm

oh ok thanks Smile .. i worked hard on them Very Happy .. i'm glad you liked them Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 8:04 pm

Very wonderful and heartfelt poems! They really touched my heart!♥️♥️
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 15, 2010 8:22 pm

thanks lilly.. i'm glad you like them Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 3:11 am

Sad sad about the grandma one
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 9:15 am

Wow Sage! Good Work! Very Nice! I Love your poems!
and I'm sorry about your grandma!

But pawsome work! Great Job BFF!! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 10:29 am

They are so beautiful, You have a talent Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sun May 16, 2010 11:02 am

Thank you Priscilla it also touched my teachers heart

I know annabee and it really happend Sad

thank you Hannah.... It's ok Hannah it was bound to happen sometime

Thanks Camilla Very Happy .... You really think so? Thanks Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Tue May 18, 2010 1:03 pm

It seems, that it must have been awful for you, I know how it feels as I recently lost a grandfather. Great poems.

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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Tue May 18, 2010 1:05 pm

Lovely poems im sorry to hear about your Grandma you must be really sad.
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Tue May 18, 2010 6:08 pm

i know admin and thank you for understanding .. i'm sorry to hear that about you granfather Sad


thank you ajcool... yeah i was the minute i knew about her death but know soince it was a while ago i just always tell myself that she's not suffering no more.. she's in a better place and will always be with me in my heart .. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 12:11 pm

your great at writing poems the grandma one was very sad it must have been hard for you
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 12:41 pm

thank you alice Smile ... yes it was Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 12:59 pm

Those are wonderful please do right more Smile i am so sorry about your grandma
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 1:06 pm

thank you.. really? you want me to write more? Smile ...... it's ok, she's always with me Very Happy ( in my heart Smile )
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 1:31 pm

Please can you write more your so good at it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Fri May 21, 2010 2:56 pm

thank you alice Smile i'll work on some Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Two poems of mine   Sat May 22, 2010 9:40 am

Sorry for your loss, Beatiful poem's though
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