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    Drakecar455
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    PostSubject: Drakes Poem   Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:57 pm

    I wrote my first Poem


    The Easter Firefly
    I know a firefly
    who flies in the night skies
    it see many clouds in the shape of pies
    goes everywere and brings toys
    toall the good little animals form girls to boys
    it stays up all night
    untill it see the sunlight
    in the morring sll the baskets
    are fulled with stuff from toys to Jakets
    with all the smiles on there faces
    it look like they all win in the races.
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:59 pm

    "it see many clouds in the shape of pies"

    I ♥️♥️♥️ that line

    Pawsome Poem!
    I would like to put it in the Magazine is that okay with you?


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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:08 pm


    I really liked your poem drake!
    that is a pawsome idea alysia to put it in magazine!
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:30 pm

    alysiacoco wrote:
    "it see many clouds in the shape of pies"

    I ♥️♥️♥️ that line

    Pawsome Poem!
    I would like to put it in the Magazine is that okay with you?


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    Sure post it in your poem
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:45 pm

    Drakecar455 wrote:
    alysiacoco wrote:
    "it see many clouds in the shape of pies"

    I ♥️♥️♥️ that line

    Pawsome Poem!
    I would like to put it in the Magazine is that okay with you?


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    Sure post it in your poem

    Okay Thank you. I will edit that in!
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:01 am

    Great Poem!!!! I think you should write more! It's amazing! I can't pick which line is my favourite because they all are my favourite! Keep writing!
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:02 am

    Great work Drake! Was it inspired by the song FireFlies? It's kinda like a re-make, it all fits in Smile Beary good job!
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:33 am

    eddy wrote:
    Great work Drake! Was it inspired by the song FireFlies? It's kinda like a re-make, it all fits in Smile Beary good job!
    actule at first no it was not but now that i read it is has the same tune.Ihad to to this for a school project and I got easter so we had to write a poem.
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:01 pm

    Oh that is so beautiful! My most favourite line is . . . untill it see the sunlight
    Just so pretty and prefect! You could be a poemertry.
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:23 am

    Drake I love your poem!
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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:53 am

    Great Poem Drake! (: Well Done Very Happy

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    PostSubject: Re: Drakes Poem   Sat Jun 11, 2011 9:43 am

    I really like it (:
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