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+7CutiePieRox GoalieBear iRachel Fawn Abbie Mousie priscillaballerina31 11 posters | Author | Message |
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priscillaballerina31 overstuffed bear
Posts : 3453 Join date : 2010-03-11 Location : somewhere over the rainbow
| Subject: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Sun Apr 18, 2010 5:56 pm | |
| WINNER IS CUTIEPIEROX!!
Win 5 Credits Code Card With a short Story People that are not able to enter this to win a prize because they have won past credits prizes or have gotten credits cards:MonkeysRock, Molly, Camilla, Zoeyzoom1324, and KristinDazzle21Contest starts: April 18,2010Contest Ends: April 23,2010Prize= Code for a 5 credits card Rules Please follow answer question below and a story:1. Do you own any rides?2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want? (If you do not own any rides just say none)3. Tell me a short story about a new ride you would like to get and what it would mean to you to be able to ride in style in this new ride.
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| | | Mousie pawsome poster
Posts : 1407 Join date : 2010-03-24 Location : E-N-G-L-A-N-D-!
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Mon Apr 19, 2010 9:01 am | |
| 1. Do you own any rides? Yes 2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want? Hoverboard, Valentines Balloon, Birthday Balloon. I would like the wings and the charriot (If you do not own any rides just say none) 3. Tell me a short story about a new ride you would like to get and what it would mean to you to be able to ride in style in this new ride. Yes I would like the charriot because I would ride in style around Buildabearville, and give medival gifts to people, like i'm really a knight. I would travel to the throne room and give people a free gift all because of helping and sharing. It would just feel like I'm a special guest in BABV. All my rides do. The charriot is chocolate brown, my favourite colour so I like that. Also it has the "Medival Theme" That is on BABV all the time. I wish I had the charriot ride! My entry! Do not copy | |
| | | Abbie building bunny
Posts : 98 Join date : 2010-04-06 Location : England
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Mon Apr 19, 2010 9:17 am | |
| 1. Do you own any rides?-Yes 2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want?-The purple motter and the rickshaw ride- I would like the wings! (If you do not own any rides just say none) 3. Tell me a short story about a new ride you would like to get and what it would mean to you to be able to ride in style in this new ride.
I walked into The Bearville Outfitters store and wandered around the shop when I saw the most heavenly white wings! I walked up to them and oulled them off the shelf. I took them over to the cashier and gave him my 5 credits. "Thank you!" I said. He smiled. I put them in a bag and went to my cub condo and tried them on! "A perfect fit!" I smiled, "What do you think, guyz?" I asked my build-a-bears they all nodded. I tried flying it wasn't all easy. I jumped from my balcony and tried to flap my wings. I fell! Luckily my furry friends were holding a matress so when I fell they caught me. I landed on the matress. When it came to my 200th time I finally got the hand of it and I started flying. My build-a-bears dropped the matress and clapped. "I'm actually flying!" I said to myself. I told my buid-a-bears I'd be back my dinner time. My first stop was the castle. I went over to it and I set the dragon free and we both flew back to Build-a-bearville together. Then when we got back me, dragon and pony flew around Build-a-bearville. I looked at my watch 6:00pm. "I have to go! I'll see you again tomorrow!" I said. I flew back to my cub-condo and took off my wings and had my dinner with my build-a-bears!
{{I really want the wings! And I would fly around with them every-day!}} | |
| | | Fawn fluffy member
Posts : 163 Join date : 2010-03-20
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Mon Apr 19, 2010 10:19 am | |
| 1. Do you own any rides?: Only my pony ride 2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want? Any ride (If you do not own any rides just say none) 3. Tell me a short story about a new ride you would like to get and what it would mean to you to be able to ride in style in this new ride. Pouring heavily in the rain. Dont you think furry friends being in backpacks is extremley boring.. Well I thought so! I wondered around in BVO searching for the right item. Gleaming near the window was a incredible ride which will carry our furry pals. I jumped for joy! When I told my furry friend the good news, she got soo happy that she even bought me thousands of presents. After buying that ride, My life changed We'd jumble through the park and spin my furry friends around in style! Everyone would stare at us in amazment! We didnt take a notice of them since we were having soo much fun! The fun just couldent end! | |
| | | iRachel pawsome poster
Posts : 877 Join date : 2010-03-29
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Mon Apr 19, 2010 11:12 am | |
| 1. Do you own any rides? Yes 2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want? I have the hoverboard, skates, broomstick, snow scooter, rickshaw ride, wings, and green scooter. I want the chariot. (If you do not own any rides just say none) 3. Tell me a short story about a new ride you would like to get and what it would mean to you to be able to ride in style in this new ride.
(this would be part of a BABV series movie thing I would put on YouTube if I had the chariot ride)
"Your mother is dying in childbirth." Someone told me this and immediately got on my chariot and gestured the horse to go. We rode as fast as we possibly could through Egypt. We finally got to our house. She was truly ill, but she was strong. The physician finally said.. "She and and the child should make it."
(yeah, it is not very good LOL)
It would mean so much to me to get the chariot ride because I can do a whole lot of pawsome things with it. Such as, making videos for YouTube, ride in style around BABV, etc.!
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| | | GoalieBear pawsome poster
Posts : 1091 Join date : 2009-06-17 Location : Somewhere :)
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:24 pm | |
| 1. Do you own any rides? Yes 2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want? Green motor scooter, broom stick, Rickshaw ride, i want the chariot. (If you do not own any rides just say none) 3. Tell me a short story about a new ride you would like to get and what it would mean to you to be able to ride in style in this new ride.. I would match with the mideaval theme in babv i would look like a knight dashing through town in a emergency and i would be able to catch uo with my friends that also have the chariot | |
| | | CutiePieRox building bunny
Posts : 37 Join date : 2010-04-06
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:40 am | |
| 1.] No 2.] None and the rickshaw.
3: We were feeling speed and adrenaline, while we were rushing down the streets of Buildabearville. I looked back at Abbi, my furry friend, she was grinning at me. I grinned back. We were going down hill and I could hear Abbi cheering from behind me. We were riding down Town Square and toward Bearville Outfitters. We stopped and brought the rickshaw in. "Oh hey! You're back! How did you like the ride?" the clerk asked us. "Fine and fun!" I replied. "Well that's good. Thanks fur testing it!" he responded. "No problem", Abbi and I said in unison. We left the Bearville Outfitters store and went to the fountain. "Want to make a wish, Abbi?" I asked her. She nodded and I handed her a coin. She held it tight and made a wish. She threw it in there. "You're done?" I asked. She nodded. "Kiley! Kiley!" The clerk yelled trying to search fur me. "Yes?" I asked. "Oh there you are", he rushed to me. "I asked the manager if I can give you the rickshaw fur free because I know how much you liked and he said, 'Yes!'. So come inside to get it", he explained to us. Abbi and I looked at each other and ran to the Bearville Outfitters. He gave us the ride and we rode home from there. As we rode home, Abbi whispered this in my ear, "My wish came true!". | |
| | | katiebee pawsome poster
Posts : 738 Join date : 2009-07-01 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:34 pm | |
| I want the hamster wheel really badly it would rock to be in a hamster wheel cause i can be like i am a little hamster sqeek sqeek LOL!! it would me so much to me if i got it sqeek lol that is my new phrase lol sqeek It would be amazing i would probaly take tons of pictures of me in it lol
My story:Ok so i have this friend named madison and well she is rich with 4,000,000 bearbills and 1,000 credits and well she just got a new ride and so she was telling me yesterday you really need to get the hamster wheel like everyone has one you are so poor! i feel sorry for you i would buy you one but.......... i don't have enough sorry. and now i am so sad cause i really won't that ride and every time i see here she says so when are you getting a job!! and i don't know what to do now it makes me Frown when i see someone on a hamster wheel i guess i will just have to wait.
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| | | Zoe building bunny
Posts : 10 Join date : 2010-03-26 Location : delaware
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:40 pm | |
| 1. Do you own any rides?no 2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want? none and i want wings (If you do not own any rides just say none) 3. Tell me a short story about a new ride you would like to get and what it would mean to you to be able to ride in style in this new ride.
Umm okay!
Once opon a time i got a pair of wings, they were awsome. Everyne said i rode in style and looked awsomly good. I was so glad, i finally made friends, before that i had no frriends because i had nothing. I was happy, i made hundreds of friends. | |
| | | HannahGemFriend30 Administrator
Posts : 2080 Join date : 2009-06-06 Location : Wonderland
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:07 pm | |
| 1. Do you own any rides? Yes I do. 2. What rides do you own and what rides do you want? I have a purple motorcycle and an ice cream balloon. I would like a pogo stick and wings and a hoverboard. One day Hannah was shopping in Build-A-Bear and saw this wonderful ride! She really liked the ride but she can't buy it because it cost too much. The few weeks Hannah tried to save some money but it wasn't just enough. The ride cost 10,000 bearbills! She can't save enough money. When her friends Zoey Sage Priscilla Camilla Abbe found out that it was Hannah's B-day this coming week. They thought maybe they could help Hannah save up money to get her dream ride. Days after days came up, They finally saved up enough money for Hannah's ride! At Hannah's Birthday they throw a suprised party for her. Hannah didn't now she was really suprised. During the party they all give gifts to Hannah and Hannah was so happy that they bought her the ride that she have been wanting... and the 6 friends all had fun and party all day long.........the end.. Hope you like my story! I couldn't think of anything so I just did about my birthday! Good Luck to Everyone! You guys are doing great!! | |
| | | CookieCrumbs830 building bunny
Posts : 75 Join date : 2010-03-29 Location : California :)
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:42 pm | |
| I own 2 rides. The Hamster ball and the old birthday balloon ride I really want any cool rides ( I forgot the name ). I think that it would be REALLY cool to have a ride where your furry friend would have a comfier way to travel XP. I would either want to buy a new ride, or but my bear lots of new clothes and furniture. Right now i only have 1 Dress for my bears XD. So as you can see, i am in need LOL. As i walked into my condo, my bears were all exclaiming how uncomfortable the backpacks were, and how they only had 1 dress. I didn't know what to do considering that i had no credits to buy the newest ride or to buy any other clothes. I tried thinking of all the possible solutions there were, but there seemed to be nothing that would work! I always celebrate my bears' birthday on one day. So as that very special day neared, i was left with nothing to get them but a bundle of my love All of our bestest bear friends entered our condo. Finally, we were all called out to the backyard, which i was very curious about, because i didn't know what was going on. All of a sudden, everyone shouts, "Surprise!!!" We were amazed with what they all gave us! It was a bundle of new clothes and a bunch of new rides! We were all excited and couldn't wait to try it out the next day. So we all lived happily ever after The End. . . | |
| | | priscillaballerina31 overstuffed bear
Posts : 3453 Join date : 2010-03-11 Location : somewhere over the rainbow
| Subject: Re: 5 Credits Card Contest Short Story Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:11 am | |
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