Drakes Poem

Administrator Posts : 140 Join date : 2010-03-28

I wrote my first Poem

The Easter Firefly
I know a firefly
who flies in the night skies
it see many clouds in the shape of pies
goes everywere and brings toys
toall the good little animals form girls to boys
it stays up all night
untill it see the sunlight
in the morring sll the baskets
are fulled with stuff from toys to Jakets
with all the smiles on there faces
it look like they all win in the races.

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:59 pm

"it see many clouds in the shape of pies"

I

that line

Pawsome Poem!
I would like to put it in the Magazine is that okay with you?

Drakes Poem 941268

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:08 pm

I really liked your poem drake!
that is a pawsome idea alysia to put it in magazine!

Administrator Posts : 140 Join date : 2010-03-28

alysiacoco wrote:: "it see many clouds in the shape of pies"

I that line

Pawsome Poem!
I would like to put it in the Magazine is that okay with you?

Sure post it in your poem

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:45 pm

Drakecar455 wrote:

alysiacoco wrote:: "it see many clouds in the shape of pies"

I that line

Pawsome Poem!
I would like to put it in the Magazine is that okay with you?

Sure post it in your poem

Okay Thank you. I will edit that in!

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:01 am

Great Poem!!!! I think you should write more! It's amazing! I can't pick which line is my favourite because they all are my favourite! Keep writing!

fluffy member Posts : 129 Join date : 2011-01-12

Great work Drake! Was it inspired by the song FireFlies? It's kinda like a re-make, it all fits in Smile

Beary good job!

Administrator Posts : 140 Join date : 2010-03-28

eddy wrote:: Great work Drake! Was it inspired by the song FireFlies? It's kinda like a re-make, it all fits in Beary good job!

actule at first no it was not but now that i read it is has the same tune.Ihad to to this for a school project and I got easter so we had to write a poem.

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:01 pm

Oh that is so beautiful! My most favourite line is . . . untill it see the sunlight
Just so pretty and prefect! You could be a poemertry. flowers

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:23 am

Drake I love your poem! Drakes Poem 941268

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:53 am

Great Poem Drake! (: Well Done Very Happy

Subject: Re: Drakes Poem Sat Jun 11, 2011 9:43 am

I really like it (:

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