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BABVGirl
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PostSubject: Hollywood Star   Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:36 pm

Julie moved to hollywood with her parents since of her mom's new job doing fashion and her dad's job was a actor.Julie found it hard to leave all her friends but in this school you got made very cool because of her parents.It was only sometimes Julie seen her mom because most of the time she was in a different part of America doing some fashion.My dad stayed in hollywood unless my mom was home and he got time to go and do his own stuff but other than that i do not really see my mom.

Today i finally get to see my mom i have not seen her in almost 8 months its going to be freaky because i will have growing to her and she will be very glamours.When i saw her i did not like her as much i realized she was NEVER there for me accept if it had something to do with her.
My mom was sad i never talked to her at all but i wasnt because i new my mom was being mean.

My mom took me into this room and she told me something...................I HAVE QUIT MY JOB i new you were so sad about this but we have lost loads of our money so we are going to have to live on the streets.My dad works i screamed.Honey we both quit are jobs so now we can blame you cant we.


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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:42 pm

That's a great story! please write more! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:54 pm

I will soon i just want some people to see it first then write more because some membears wont read it all at once.
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:15 am

Lilly i updated it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:34 am

I like this story BABVGirl (your my sis).It made me shiver when you said will my mom quit her job i was like oh no.I thought it was true and was like what have you done.
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:26 am

The suspense is killing me! Update it! Please update it!
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BABVGirl
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:09 pm

I updated LILLY
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:52 pm

OMG! no, her mom is not being nice. Please write more! where are they going to sleep?
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Fri Jul 09, 2010 8:00 pm

This story is really good.
Keep writing some more lol
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Sat Jul 10, 2010 2:53 am

Intresting story.I have 1 tip for you,On the last paragraph you just blurted out with it.You should have done more writing on the last paragraph because the way the mom blurted it out like that.
I hope you dont get sad with my tip because your story was amazing,Intresting,Great and awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:41 pm

Cool story does it have more?
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:08 am

Cool Story! Can you post more, please?
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Remi11
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:30 pm

That's really good! One tip: Try to make it from one point of view.. Like don't say "I walked to school. Jamie then went inside" Say "I walked to school. I then went inside" Otherwise, very good, can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:18 pm

Pawsome story can't wait to read more Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:55 am

WOW you did a good job i love it right some more Smile !
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:17 pm

Ahhh Its like a real story on TV Write more!!
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Thu Nov 18, 2010 10:57 am

Write some more! Please =)
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PostSubject: Re: Hollywood Star   Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:50 pm

wow it is really good thank you 4 writing this!
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