Hollywood Star

Julie moved to hollywood with her parents since of her mom's new job doing fashion and her dad's job was a actor.Julie found it hard to leave all her friends but in this school you got made very cool because of her parents.It was only sometimes Julie seen her mom because most of the time she was in a different part of America doing some fashion.My dad stayed in hollywood unless my mom was home and he got time to go and do his own stuff but other than that i do not really see my mom.

Today i finally get to see my mom i have not seen her in almost 8 months its going to be freaky because i will have growing to her and she will be very glamours.When i saw her i did not like her as much i realized she was NEVER there for me accept if it had something to do with her.
My mom was sad i never talked to her at all but i wasnt because i new my mom was being mean.

My mom took me into this room and she told me something...................I HAVE QUIT MY JOB i new you were so sad about this but we have lost loads of our money so we are going to have to live on the streets.My dad works i screamed.Honey we both quit are jobs so now we can blame you cant we.

That's a great story! please write more!

I will soon i just want some people to see it first then write more because some membears wont read it all at once.

Lilly i updated it

I like this story BABVGirl (your my sis).It made me shiver when you said will my mom quit her job i was like oh no.I thought it was true and was like what have you done.

The suspense is killing me! Update it! Please update it!

I updated LILLY

OMG! no, her mom is not being nice. Please write more! where are they going to sleep?

This story is really good.
Keep writing some more lol

Intresting story.I have 1 tip for you,On the last paragraph you just blurted out with it.You should have done more writing on the last paragraph because the way the mom blurted it out like that.
I hope you dont get sad with my tip because your story was amazing,Intresting,Great and awesome.
Bear hugs
SarahBear

Cool story does it have more?

Cool Story! Can you post more, please?

That's really good! One tip: Try to make it from one point of view.. Like don't say "I walked to school. Jamie then went inside" Say "I walked to school. I then went inside" Otherwise, very good, can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!

Pawsome story can't wait to read more

WOW you did a good job i love it right some more !

Ahhh Its like a real story on TV Write more!!

Write some more! Please =)

wow it is really good thank you 4 writing this!