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PawsomeSophie
junior helper
Posts : 319
Join date : 2010-06-10
 |  Subject: Best Friends  Sat Jun 19, 2010 2:54 am | |
| Emily was Ruby's best friend they had been best friends since they were 3 years old Ruby and Emily are now 13 years old.Emily and Ruby were playing a game when Olivia the bully come over and took Emily of Ruby.Olivia played skipping with Emily she acutally started enjoying playing with Olivia.Ruby was very lonely and thought emily should have known better.
Ruby sat down in the quiet area while everyone laughed at her because she had no friends.Ruby wanted to tell the teacher but she could not because Olivia made her not tell a teacher or if she did she would be bullied even more.Emily and olivia walked home from school so did Ruby but she went the long way.She was finally at home crying in her bedroom.Her mom got really worried because she was acting strange.Ruby took a hot air balloon to school.At playtime she noticed Olivia was not in and Emily come up to play with her.
Why would i let you play with me you left me for Olivia the bully and you never came back.So dont use me.Emily ran of to play with the other girls.Ruby hide and seek with the headmaster while all the girls in Ruby's class said go away we dont want you here you left ruby so go.
When all the pupils got back to class the teacher told them that Olivia had moved school.At the other play time Ruby got offered to play by the girls and they did not let emily play.
The end
Dont leave your friends for someone else or this could be the consequence having no one to play with.
(I will be writing storys about consequence for sometime this is my 1st one)
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Lillybearathlete1
rockin' officer
Posts : 2308
Join date : 2010-03-24
Location : USA! :D
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:41 am | |
| Great story. It has an interesting plot. I can't wait to see what happens in the end. | |
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PawsomeSophie
junior helper
Posts : 319
Join date : 2010-06-10
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:13 am | |
| Thanks Lilly i will update it soon | |
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HannahGemFriend30
Administrator
Posts : 2080
Join date : 2009-06-06
Location : Wonderland
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:15 am | |
| Cool! Your Story is really good!  | |
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PawsomeSophie
junior helper
Posts : 319
Join date : 2010-06-10
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:24 am | |
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HannahGemFriend30
Administrator
Posts : 2080
Join date : 2009-06-06
Location : Wonderland
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:29 am | |
| That's good that you story has a theme!
I also agree with you this had happen to me many times! | |
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PawsomeSophie
junior helper
Posts : 319
Join date : 2010-06-10
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:40 am | |
| Yes its so people no what it would be like if they left there best friend | |
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priscillaballerina31
overstuffed bear
Posts : 3453
Join date : 2010-03-11
Location : somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:29 pm | |
| That is a great story with a great lesson to be learned.
I look forward to reading more! | |
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Funnybunny77
Moderator
Posts : 1383
Join date : 2010-04-26
Location : In an empty popcorn bag :)
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:34 pm | |
| Pawsome story! I hope you make more  | |
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Lillybearathlete1
rockin' officer
Posts : 2308
Join date : 2010-03-24
Location : USA! :D
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sun Jun 20, 2010 6:22 am | |
| Pawsome story! I love the end | |
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alicecoolgirl
junior helper
Posts : 493
Join date : 2010-04-23
Location : England
| | Subject: Re: Best Friends Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:31 am | |
| What a awesome story, I really enjoyed it | |
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